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The Soft Wind

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The crisp breeze awakens,
and plays gently with my ribbons.
Invisible hands  embrace me,
and shows me beauty only I can see.
Loving lips brush my cheek,
and convinces me that I'm not meek.
My tears fall from my eyes,
but the wind brushes them away and tells me not to cry.
Alright, my second poem! I never have taken any poetry lesson so feel free to leave tips. Giggle I enjoy reading comments!Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Huggy heart) [V6] 
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DoveAngel8's avatar
lovely,
your talent seems to be in short to very short tight work.
maybe work on something a little longer when you have time.